Ohio Impromptu

What happened to Nicola? She moved away.

For a friend who I may not ever see again. For Nicola. Leaving Works Two Ways. The grass waves goodbye without feeling, stuck on the thought that the wind will ...

Yeah, as a haiku it wasn't very good. However, if you extended it and made into something different i think it shows a lot of promise. Maybe give that a ...

The feeling behind that was overwhelming. The writing did it justice too, which is always a good thing to see. How was it formatted on your computer?

Its funny, that reminded me of part of a book I'm reading for English class. Its called The Chocolate War and the way it describes one of the defining aspects ...

It was nice. Simple and innocent but with something deeper than what the words show. I like the past stanza the best. Keep up the good work.

Very nice. The feeling and description was nothing short of wonderful. I liked how you started with those last two lines from your story, gave the poem direction right from ...

Thanks for the feedback guys. :) Rincewind: The other pieces I'm entering are longer, and more interesting too, i guess. I forgot to mention that its not a competition for ...

Ah, the inspiration of bad news. Enjoy I'll Lower My Voice For The Winter Its always more dramatic if I lie on the floor, looking up at the separatist light. ...

If its not too much trouble, could you go and take a look at a piece I'm about to post called "I'll Lower My Voice For The Winter"? It'll be ...

Bask in the glory of my bad quality school photo. Sorry, its the only one I have. Enjoy.

Hey all. I posted this a while ago but I'm posting it again, for good reason. Theres this writing competition run by a local university that I'm entering soon in ...

Enjoy. Reflection Isn't Enough Somewhere beyond healthy psychosis, and lost points of view, someone laughs like they got the best of me. Alone and drinking with split personalities, all of ...

Sorry about that little thing. I should have made it more clear. Consider it changed. Anything else anyone wanna say?

Airport Dreams Never Left The Ground Twenty seven hours without sleep and Miles was on top of the world. Well, not exactly, but Moscow is close enough to it. The ...